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"Great job. Just needs to be a bit longer."
This is probably the first skating animation I've ever seen one Newgrounds, but it's great. The time and effort you put into this is evident in the way the stick figure moves. Some people might say "Make the guy riding the board better", but I think hes just fine. The 2D style was great, proving that you don't have to have top-notch graphics to make a great movie. I know I sound like every other person here, but longer is better. It all flowed very smoothly, and the board and person worked together like magic. Great job.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU for your overall 9 : D -
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I've never been a big fan of loops, though I did watch this one a couple of times. This left me a little disappointed, Sun Mafia flashes usually have much better graphics. There wasn't much point to it and the words went by too fast. Slow down the words and make it longer, include a deer maybe.
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"Newgrounds could use some freash ideas like this."
Nice origenal game, it ran pretty smoothly and the physics were reasonble, if not over-exagerated. If it ran faster as you proggresssed it would become more challenging, but it was origenal and I like that.
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Well, it was short, but it really wasn't too bad. I thought the dance moves were great at the end, so was the music. I just got'a say that maybe a little longer would help, but still, great work, keep it up.
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"It was WWAAAYYY too choppy. That NEEDS change."
Well, first of all, I had no idea what I was doing (Swiming around and existing...). Second, it was far, far too choppy. It HAS to be smooth. I encourage sequals, but only if you improve on the comments of the first one. I know my coumputer is slow...but it was just unaceptedbly choppy. I just can't stand that. Like I said, I encourage a sequal, but only if they are noticbly better.
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"You almost had a great movie, then you blew it."
The movie was okay and I was going to vote a four, but then that long text scrolled over, this was for your english class? I found a lot of misused words, reapeated sentences, that just blew it. Maybe taking a little longer to work on that. Oh, and the "Hidden scene" is where the guy is pulling the sword and he farts.
Author's Response:
I agree, I do need to work on my writing a little bit.
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You clearly have improved upon some of the aspects of the other games. Good job, but that explosion still could use some graphical improvement. I think that when I entered a password, it defaulted back to easy diffiulty, that could be better. In genral, great game, I'd love to see five.
Author's Response:
As its taking a while I might release five without some player graphics changes... I'll probably need to change them again, they look rubbish
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"Great job. Spectaculer. Just plain great."
Very, very, nice. I don't give 10s, all movies can be improved, so take my nine sort of like a 10. You just did a great job, and it showed. When Michael was talking, his other arm moved, most other artists would have overlooked that. You attention to detail was great, the spotlight effect was...was...better than perfect. The ghosts in the end were amusing, as well as the act. I hope to see more like this.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
I've really been trying to add those little details in movement to make it seem (somewhat) realistic. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Wow, great submission. The-evil-bucket salutes your flash prowness. Very addictive. Is 1648 on hard a good score? Anyway, very good job with the stone backround, it's great. The music could be better suited at times. Also, the charcter looked a little odd. But I love the way the ghosts move, that's great work. I think the bombs should have made a larger explosion, and some work could be done on the explosion graphic. But overal, great. I don't give 10s because every game could be improved, so pretend my nine is a ten.
Author's Response:
I will, don't you worry - I also appreciate the suggestions, because as you say "every game could be improved"
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I don't know why, but it seemed repetitive. It's not that it was bad, it's just that it wasn't good. The Mario's that spelled "Loading" look like you ran out of space. It was just too much like Mario. I mean, the walking on the clouds and the hored of turtle things was diffrent, but it was still too much like the origenel Mario.
Author's Response:
Lol. You're right, I did run out of space for the loading mario's :P
Yeah, I didn't focus on it being a funny, good or bad vid. As i said in the 'autor's note' this was made entirely as an experiment. It's my very first go at sprites, so nothing interesting yet. I'll submite one of my older non-sprite movies for you then... the evil sode machine! xD it's a short. You might like it :P
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